Showing posts with label 11th Doctor. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 11th Doctor. Show all posts

Saturday, 16 December 2023

Prime Directive




 







INSPIRATION


It's 2013. Character's line of action figures has regenerated, now into 3.75" scale. The plan was to make a new story to showcase the mini Doctor and Clara as soon as possible. This wasn't the story I'd intended to make but that tale would have taken more effort and time than I had available so I needed to come up with a short and easy to make adventure. To that end I turned to some pitches that I'd sent to Doctor Who Adventures that were never picked up. Among them was the tale of a robot in a junk yard...


CAST

11th Doctor, Clara Oswald and a Star Wars Dark Trooper.
This is the first appearance of the new scale character figures in any story. 3.75" was always my preferred scale and I've only strayed from it three times - in  the 90s for Batman and Star Trek and in 2006 for Doctor Who.
So when they announced that Doctor Who would be switching scale, I'd actually already been thinking that I'd like some smaller figures. Not at the expense of the wonderful 5" figures, but just the Doctor, TARDIS, maybe a companion and some iconic monsters. Enough to fight alongside Luke Skywalker or Indiana Jones.
By the end of series 7a (The Angels Take Manhattan), I'd seriously lost interest in new Doctor Who. I found the stories overly smug, self-involved, utterly engaging and worse, totally lacking in new and scary monsters. The figure line needed something to reinvigorate it and the prospect of this new scale really did invigorate my enthusiasm. I viewed the next series (series 7b/ 2013) with fresh eyes and a renewed excitement.
Some people don't like change and many fans took an instant dislike to the new scale without seeing any prototypes and I believe that bile, vitriol and unjustified sense of betrayal has become a habit that has poisoned fandom.
Unfortunately, some of the figures weren't that great so many of the fans weren't won over. Extremely rare chase figures and a couple of waves of repaints and repeats meant that the figures never really took off. By the time they were producing really good figures, Amy Pond, the 10th Doctor, classic daleks, fans had all but given up.
As someone that did support the scale change and bought their first wave upon release in May 2013, I was really disappointed. Clara's hair was wrong and by the time they corrected it, I was loathe to buy another. And the daleks were just a shade too small.

SCRIPT

The pitch already set out what happened page by page so it didn't take long to work up a basic script to shoot from. This was done in June 2013.


SHOOTING

The story was on the same day using a single set dressed with various bits of paraphernalia from various toy lines. How much can you spot?
There's the vehicle maintenance engineer mini-rig from Star Wars, bits of the Star Trek 2009 transporter playset, the Queen's hyperdrive from Star Wars episode 1 and my own custom walls used in The Space Mutant.
The whole story was short virtually in order apart from a couple of reverse shots of the robot which were done out of sequence.


EDITS

The story was edited just as quickly and completed the same day.

CONTINUITY

This story could be dropped anywhere into series 7b. I arbitrarily choose to put it after Cold War.



TRANSMISSION

On it's original publication, I had intended to get the story out as quickly as possible but the AFT was stacked up its monthly episodes.
So it was originally published on Outpost Doctor Who forum, a page a day between 10th-13th June 2013.
It then appeared on the AFT main site on 24th Feb 2014.
It was republished here on 16 December 2023.

Saturday, 2 December 2023

The Eleven Doctors - part five

 







INSPIRATION

The idea of doing a dedicated anniversary story for the 50th actually came to me quite late, though you'd think it'd be a no-brainer! The 2013 schedule had already been allocated to the Daleks v Cybermen arc and the final part was originally supposed to play out in November. But I decided to move that to December making way for an anniversary story.                                           
At the time, it appeared the official anniversary story The Day of the Doctor would snub the classic Doctors. We had no idea that they'd actually ALL turn up (even a flash forward to the incoming 12th Doctor!) but I figured the best way to put all the Doctors together was in action figure form.

The conceit of getting Sarah Jane to collect the Doctors (joined along the way by the Brig) came quite early and I worked out the format of spending the first couple of episodes revisiting old adventures, followed by three eps throwing the Doctors together, realising that the main joy of multi-Doctor stories is seeing the Doctors mix and get along (or not).


The actual stories Sarah Jane visits were changed during the writing. She was supposed to see the Brig during the Pertwee segment (The Three Doctors) and pick him up during Robot. But this meant I couldn't use any of the various 4th Doctor monsters as the 4th Doctor wouldn't have met them yet.

For similar reasons, I chose not to have the 8th Doctor picked up from The TV Movie, deciding instead upon a "new" adventure based on a Daryl Joyce painting for the Doctor Who magazine, itself based on Spearhead From Space.

Sarah was supposed to pick up the 10th Doctor from Planet of the Ood but when John Barrowman was upset not to be asked back for the official anniversary, I decided to find a way to include Captain Jack.

My initial idea was that the 4th Doctor would visit Sarah Jane, stealing an idea Gareth Roberts wanted to use on the Sarah Jane Adventures where Sarah would find the 4th Doctor in her wheelie bin.

In the very first storyline, it's actually the 11th Doctor that is summoning his other selves. He's realised that his contact with the Daleks has made them powerful so he takes his various selves out of time before they each meet the Daleks in order to weaken them. But with the Daleks v Cybermen arc running, I wanted to avoid making either of them the villain so I looked at other monsters - but none of them had met ALL the Doctors! The closest was the Master but at the time I had other plans for him (those plans are lost in the mists of time!) so I had to ditch the "contact with the Doctor made them strong" element.

Given that it was the golden anniversary and with the announcement of the (then) upcoming humanoid Axon figure, I realised it would be fitting to make them my main villain - except the Axos set was then delayed! (see shooting below)

Originally, I'd planed to avoid The Eleven Doctors as a title, on the assumption that the other fan video sites would use it. But having considered several other titles on the theme of Fifty or Golden, I decided the best one really was The Eleven Doctors, so I went for it.

CAST

Here's the full list: Sarah Jane Smith (Whatever Happened To Sarah Jane Smith?), 11th Doctor (Eleventh Hour set), Mechanoid, Daleks (The Chase), 1st Doctor (original SDCC release), 2nd Doctor (original SDCC release), The Brigadier (The Three Doctors), 3rd Doctor (The Time Warrior), Lynx (The Time Warrior), 4th Doctor (Pyramids of Mars with scarf from City of Death set), D84, SV7, Voc robots, 5th Doctor (Time Crash), Peri (Caves of Androzani), Sharaz Jek, 6th Doctor (Original release), Peri (Attack of the Cybermen), Cyberman (Earthshock), Dalek (Remembrance of the Daleks), 7th Doctor (Remembrance of the Daleks), Autons (Rose), 8th Doctor (11 Doctors set), Cassandra, Jabe, Moxx of Balhoun, Face of Boe, 9th Doctor, Rose, Captain Jack, 10th Doctor (11th Doctors set), Martha Jones, Zygon, Pyrovile, Drashig, Slitheen, Empress of the Racnos, Krillitanes (grey and brown), Axon creature, Axon humanoid (custom), K-9, Robot K1, Weeping Angel, Sea Devil, Ice Warrior, Pig Slave, Sycorax Warrior, Mummy, Silent (both open and closed mouth), Empty Child, Ood Sygma, Sutekh, Graske, Smiler, Clockwork Robot (blue), Silurian (series 5), Judoon Captain, Kroton (custom), Heavenly Host, Scarecrow.


The first stumbling block in the production and with some footage already shot, was the Axon set which was due in 2013 but then delayed to 2014. After considering making the Zygons into the main enemy (but risking being too similar to Day of the Doctor), I contacted some chums in the toy industry to see if I could borrow an Axon figure, to no avail. So I decided to make a custom version. She's simply a Primeval Jenny with greenstuff added in the eye area. Her skin is painted in a yellow undercoat and given a gold wash.

What's that in the background of part five, page one? Top marks if you spotted my little paper Kroton.


SCRIPT

With the first storyline done by April 213, the script was finished on 28 May 2013.

The final panel of the script was removed and not filmed. This would have shown Clara appear and kill the Silent, thus saving the Doctor and tying in with The Name of the Doctor (the last aired story at the time) where she's sent back across the Doctor's timeline to save him at various points.


Another scene cut at the scripting stage would have seen the 5th Doctor concerned for his companion Peri given that she is currently (in his timeline) suffering from Spectrox Toxaemia. He asks the 8th Doctor what her ultimate fate is but the 8th Doctor genuinely doesn't know. This could've been interpreted as a comment on how Peri's muddied departure was handled on screen. But it was actually a veiled foreshadowing of the end of the Daleks v Cybermen arc where the Doctor... well, if you don't remember, let's save that for when that arc is re-published.

SHOOTING


One of the fun things about this story was reusing sets from TV adventures. Some were dictated by which episodes were revisited during the story but most (for the Axon's holograms) were picked from my favourite downloadable sets. How many did you recognise?

Filming began on 8 July 2013 with the Traken scenes.

9 July: Sandminer corridors, Nerva Beacon and The Time Warrior stairwell.

10 July: Rasillon's tomb from The Five Doctors and UNIT HQ.

12 July: Platform One and Torchwood exit in Cardiff.


13 July: London streets for Remembrance of the Daleks and the interior of Sarah Jane's house.

14 July: Attack of the Cybermen sewer

15 July: Skaro corridors


16 July: 1960s TARDIS interior and Spiridon jungle

17 July: Exterior of Sarah Jane's house and the Silence timeship. I realised since it was only used for one panel, I didn't need to make the whole console.

There followed a break in filming while I made the sets for the next block, resuming on 8 August with Sharaz Jek's lair in The Caves of Androzani.


14 Aug: The Chase.

22 Aug: Green screen elements.

Once I'd made my Axon female custom, the Axos interiors could be shot (18th Sept and 21st Sept)

24 Sept: The 8th Doctor segment was referred to as San Fransisco in the script and was supposed to a street with upturned cars. But when I researched, I discovered the Daryl Joyce painting was actually set in Singapore. The set is based on the Sunrise Mall in Singapore.


26 Sept: The first Doctor encounters the Krillitanes on Castrovalva - simply because I had the set to hand.

8 Oct: The final bits and pieces including the Axon hologram room (with the hologram switched off) and an insert of Inter Minor from Carnival of Monsters

13 Nov: final pick ups of the Doctors seeing the Silent ship.

EDITS


Editing for the story was done alongside filming with each scene being slotted in as they were done.

One of the final panels to be done was the one in part 3 where the 7th Doctor peeks into the future. I needed a distinctive setting. Some people suggested the Powell Estate but I struggled to find a recognisable image. In the end I went with Starship UK and used an image from an AFT story that has yet to be republished: Return To Starship UK.

The other remaining panels involved exterior shots of Axos, the last being completed on 13 Nov.


TRANSMISSION

In its original run, the story ran for five consecutive days, Monday 18 Nov to Friday 22 Nov.

I'd been hyping the story for months with tidbits on Facebook and it even had its own dedicated website: theelevendoctors.co.uk. As part of the build up, I had my own countdown of my favourite Doctors.

Ten years on, without the time to make anything remotely similar for the 60th anniversary, it seemed a perfect time to republish this and it ran weekly from 4 Nov to 2 Dec 2023.

CONTINUITY

Where do we start?

This story revisits a number of televised episodes directly:

The Chase (part 6) The Doctor and his companions are now prisoners of the Mechanoids when the Daleks, having pursued the TARDIS for the last five episodes, arrive.

The Three Doctors (part 2) While the third Doctor and Jo have been transported to Omega's black hole, the second Doctor is left behind at UNIT HQ.

The Time Warrior (part 1) The Doctor is investigating the disappearances of scientists and his sensors are set off by the appearance of a Sontaran projecting himself from the past.

Robots of Death (part 3) The Doctor and his friend D84 are on the look out for Taren Capel's workshop. The cry that D84 heard is Leela, locked in the crew room.

The Caves of Androzani (part 2) The Doctor and Peri have been rescued by Sharaz Jek only to find the vile creature has romantic intentions towards Peri.

Attack of the Cybermen (part 1) The Doctor and Peri are following a signal from, they believe, a stranded alien, unaware that the Cybermen are at large in London's sewers. (Ideally, this scene would have used the black stealth Cyberman figure but I didn't own one.)

Remembrance of the Daleks (part 4) This scene is probably during the end of the story. While Ace follows Mike, the Doctor heads back to the school to finish off the Imperial Daleks.


The End of the World
. The Doctor brings Rose to Platform 1 to watch the final death of Earth.

The Last of the Time Lords. With the Master defeated, the Doctor and Martha bring Captain Jack back to Torchwood.











Saturday, 31 December 2022

The Uninvited Guest

 
















Minimal cast for this one. The Doctor is from The Eleventh Hour set. Mary St Pride is the Gelth Zombie from The Unquiet Dead. The spiders are from Primeval.

This story was written back in 2008 when the classic figures were just about to come out. I had a story for the sixth Doctor and a story for the fifth Doctor but was really short of ideas for the fourth when this popped into my head. I'm not sure why it wasn't made back then.

When the 7th Doctor figure was announced in 2009 I considered switching him in but still it didn't get made.

It wasn't until 2013 with Matt Smith on his way out I decided to give him a final outing and The Uninvited Guest fitted the bill perfectly as a simple, relatively easy to shoot tale.






Filming took place on 8 October 2013 with a few pick-ups of the spiders done on 30 July 2014.
The sets are reused from a 2011 8th Doctor story, Play Time.



The story began editing in early 2014 but didn't get far into page one. Editing resumed in July 2014. Unfortunately due to a severe lack of time, the photoshopping is rushed and not as good as I'd like.

This story was originally posted on 31 July 2014.
2014, for me had been a very busy year so by July, I was ready to put the final stop on the AFT.
At the time, I lamented that the AFT wouldn't be there at the dawn of a new Doctor (Peter Capaldi).

It was reposted on 31 Dec 2022 - I chose this episode to celebrate the anniversary of Matt Smith's first appearance.




There's no mention of any other stories here so it could appear at any point in the 11th Doctor's run. He's still in his tweed outfit so it's sometime prior to The Snowmen