Saturday, 28 October 2023

Fallen Angel - one episode

 









INSPIRATION

I wanted a Moffatesque season finale. Having built up the Dalek assault on the dream dimension, I wanted to take the story in  completely different direction to find an unexpected way of resolving it.
The original draft of the final episode took it even further with the Doctor arriving in a mystical setting, meeting odd characters that represented the various people Angel had met on her travels in the TARDIS. It would also have included flying dragons. Angel's subconscious self was represented by a castle that the Doctor and his new friends would have to storm. Only once inside would the Doctor realise he's inside Angel's mind, not in the dream dimension proper.
Having virtually destroyed the TARDIS interior at the top of the episode, I toyed with the idea of the TARDIS reforming with the RTD era control room. This would basically wipe my previous 8th Doctor AFT stories from history (since they're set later than this in the 8th Doctor's timeline) so I decided against it. Just as well, since this predated The Day Of The Doctor which established the War Doctor and his version of the TARDIS interior!
For a long time, the episode was untitled. One title I considered was Out Of Your Mind but I thought this might give too much away. The idea of a fall angel getting redemption was much more appropriate.

CAST

8th Doctor - 11 Doctors boxset
Angel 0 Hermione Grainger (Deathly Hallows)
Dalek Strategist - From Day of the Daleks
Dalek Drones - From Remembrance of the Daleks
Dalek Scientist - From Death To The Daleks
Dalek Supreme - From Remembrance of the Daleks
Dream Person 1 - Claudia (Primeval)
Dream Person 2 - Connor (Primeval)
Dream Person 3 - Abby (Primeval)

SHOOTING

The Skaro scenes were shot on 5th Dec 2010 at the same time as the other Skaro scenes for stories 1 and 4. The TARDIS scenes were shot backwards, beginning with the Doctor and Angel leaving in the TARDIS and ending with the TARDIS interior being destroyed. They were done on 7th Jan 2011.

The Windsor street scenes were filmed weeks later. A pick-up shot of the Doctor and Angel in Angel's memory gallery was taken on 8th March 2011. At the same time a new ending was written and filmed.



EDITS

The images for this final episode were completed on 8th March 2011 with lettering following soon after.
As with many stories in the season, more dialogue was added during the editing to flesh out the stories and characters' motivations. That included a change to the ending.
The original ending was set in the TARDIS and would see the Doctor and Angel ride off into the time vortex. I changed it partly to give a more emotional ending and party to finish on a clean slate while still allowing Angel to return.
Most of the images in Angel's memory gallery were taken from the opening episode of the series before Angel was a duplicate but some images were specially taken. There's a hidden image of Angel standing next to the 11th Doctor. A red herring? Or a glimpse of something we've yet to see? Honest answer: it was a little easter egg but has no meaning and doesn't refer to any planned stories at all.

CONTINUITY

Although not explicitly states in any of the stories, I place the Dalek parts of this series around 3011 - a thousand years from the time the story was made. The Doctor's reference to the Daleks being a renewed threat in a thousand years' time is a reference to The Dalek Masterplan, set in 4000AD.

TRANSMISSION

This finale was originally posted on 30th April 2011 topping off a ten week run of 8th Doctor stories at a time when AFT was a regular monthly thing. It was well received enough that I was planning a second series for the following year but it never happened.
It was re-published online on 28th October 2023.

NEXT TIME

I haven't had time to make an all-original anniversary special so we'll have to make do with the one I made for the 50th. Over the next FIVE WEEKS.


Saturday, 21 October 2023

The Nightmare Legacy part three

 






INSPIRATION


It was always the plan that the Daleks would top and tail the series with Angel being the link. In reusing the Daleks again I had to come up with something new to do with them in order to justify it.
I was reminded of many films where World War II Nazis are shown looking into the occult in order to win the war. This was something the Daleks have never done before - admitting that there are things beyond their comprehension that could be harnessed in their ongoing war- but it's something touched on in Story One where the Daleks are experimenting with human fear.
The crux of this story of course, is the revelation in part two that the real Angel was murdered by the Daleks in the first episode of this series and the Doctor has been travelling with a Dalek duplicate all this time. Whether or not she'll be redeemed... well you'll have to tune in next week.
It was always my intention that Angel would turn out to be a pawn of the Daleks. In the original storylines, the Doctor escapes with a component for the Daleks' latest machine but the Supreme is unconcerned since the component needs to be charged with artron energy in order to work. It would transpire that the component was the Doctor's new companion.
One of the original titles for the story was The Nightmare Gate.


CAST

8th Doctor - 11 Doctors boxset
Angel - Hermione Grainger (Deathly Hallows)
Psychoghasts - Dementor (Harry Potter)
Dalek Strategist - From Day of the Daleks
Dalek Drones - from Remembrance of the Daleks
Dalek Scientist- from Death To The Daleks
Dalek Supreme - From Remembrance of the Daleks
Nox Guard - Silurian Scorpion from Primeval


Under my new Dalek colour schemes (see Fear of the Daleks) this story sees the debut of the gold Dalek Strategist.

SHOOTING

The Planet Nox uses silver crepe paper as it's floor with walls of black and brown crepe paper. The rocks are made of foam filler sprayed with grey rock paint. Halloween cobwebs are added to give the planet a misty look. 
The scenes on Skaro and the Dalek ship use sets based on City of the Daleks and were shot back to back with scenes for Fear of the Daleks.

The Nocturus model is made of sculpy and treated in photoshop to give it a stoney and veiny texture




EDITS

During the editing it became apparent that a lot was happening very quickly so I slowed the pace and made it three episodes instead of just the original two, though some miscalculation led to an extra page for part two
The 'money shot' of the Doctor watching the Daleks gather round the Nocturus entrance was done twice, the first image really not cutting the mustard. The second image uses the Dalek city from The Daleks as its background.

TRANSMISSION

Part one was posted on 8th April, part two on 16th April and part three on 23rd April- the same day as The Impossible Astronaut, the opening story of series 6 on TV. Had I given it more thought, I would have started the series two weeks earlier so the final episodes weren't over-shadowed by real Who.
Every episode in the series so far has ended with a taster of the next part. I decided to forego that this week so as not to spoil the final episode.
The story was re-presented weekly from 7th to 21st October 2023.


CONTINUITY

Although not stated on screen, this story is set in the year 3011 as is its predecessor Fear of the Daleks.